The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart
depincts
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depicts
the sum of
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the duration
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of phone conversations in the UK, represented by
billions
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of
minutes
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, categorised into three types over a period of seven years. As an
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trend, local fixed
lines
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had an
oscilation
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oscillation
in terms of duration,
while
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mobiles and national and international fixed line conversations increased.
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, at the beginning of the presented period, there were significantly more calls using local fixed
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than any other. In 1995 they started to rise from 70 billion
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per
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. The upward trend continued, in 1996 being almost 80
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billions
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billion
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,
then
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with 5
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billions
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billion
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in the next
year
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. In 1998 local fixed
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were used
to
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almost 90 billion
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, only to reach
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their
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peak in 1999 with approximately 90
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billions
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billion
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. After that, it decreased
steadilly
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steadily
with
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to
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5
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billions
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billion
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per
year
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until 2002.
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, national and international fixed
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climbed up from a little less than 40 billion
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per
year
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in 1995 to nearly 60
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billions
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billion
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in 2002.
Mobiles
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calls followed the same upward trend, increasing
steadilly
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steadily
from more or less 2
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billions
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billion
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in 1995 until 1999,
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rockted
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rocketed
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to roughly 45
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billions
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billion
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in 2002, touching the highest point. From 1995 to 2002, modern times had
footprinting
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its
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technology, changing the usage of fixed
lines
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. Over time, mobile conversations increased progressively. Calls from local fixed
lines
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are still the most used, but
them
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they
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and national and international fixed
lines
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sequentially decreased.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billions, minutes, lines, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number of minutes
  • telephone calls
  • categories
  • local – fixed line
  • national and international – fixed line
  • mobiles
  • general trend
  • yearly totals
  • significant changes
  • milestones
  • data
  • rise significantly
  • decline
  • steady increase
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • exponential growth
  • over the period
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