Three pie charts below shows the changes in annual spending by a particular UK schools in 1981, 1991 and 2002. Summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main featrures, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table describes the difference in the income every year by specific UK kindergartens in 1981,1991 and 2002.
Overall
,there are no huge changes between double Linking Words
years
, Use synonyms
while
teachers' funding and Linking Words
equipment
were found to increase in their budgets, other things like Use synonyms
equipment
and workers' wages were reduced in their fees
There were some crucial changes between 1981 and the first 20th century. Use synonyms
Firstly
the budgets for doors , chairs, wood...etc drastically shrank from 15% to 5% , indeed, the wages of labourers gradually decreased by 7%.
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On the other hand
, lots of items witnessed a huge difference between twin Linking Words
years
. Use synonyms
For instance
, the money paid to scholars increased to half the general income, Linking Words
in addition
, books and other elements related to students jumped from 15% to 20%. Linking Words
Lastly
,there is Linking Words
slight
raised in the proportion of insurance about 1%.
Generally, there are no huge changes between double Correct article usage
a slight
years
, Use synonyms
while
teachers' funding and Linking Words
equipment
were found to increase in their budgets, other things like Use synonyms
equipment
and workers' wages were reduced in their fees. For Use synonyms
this
, there is not too huge a difference between the two compared Linking Words
years
mentioned above.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, equipment with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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