Three pie charts below shows the changes in annual spending by a particular UK schools in 1981, 1991 and 2002. Summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main featrures, and make comparisons where relevant.

Three pie charts below shows the changes in annual spending by a particular UK schools in 1981, 1991 and 2002. 

Summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main featrures, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table describes the difference in the income every year by specific UK kindergartens in 1981,1991 and 2002.
Overall
,there are no huge changes between double
years
,
while
teachers' funding and
equipment
were found to increase in their budgets, other things like
equipment
and workers' wages were reduced in their fees There were some crucial changes between 1981 and the first 20th century.
Firstly
the budgets for doors , chairs, wood...etc drastically shrank from 15% to 5% , indeed, the wages of labourers gradually decreased by 7%.
On the other hand
, lots of items witnessed a huge difference between twin
years
.
For instance
, the money paid to scholars increased to half the general income,
in addition
, books and other elements related to students jumped from 15% to 20%.
Lastly
,there is
slight
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raised in the proportion of insurance about 1%. Generally, there are no huge changes between double
years
,
while
teachers' funding and
equipment
were found to increase in their budgets, other things like
equipment
and workers' wages were reduced in their fees. For
this
, there is not too huge a difference between the two compared
years
mentioned above.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, equipment with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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