Museums are places that exhibit all the historical artifacts and paintings that represent the author's will and passion. However, some places charge entrance fees while others are free to enter,

Museums

are places that exhibit all the historical

artifacts

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and paintings that represent the author's will and passion.

However

, some places charge entrance fees

while

others are free to enter,

this

phenomenon has raised

the

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controversial debate among

people

.

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essay will provide suitable reasons why

museums

should have a fee to enter. It can easily be seen that museum owners charge admission fees when entering to serve a few purposes,

for instance

, when preserving historical

artifacts

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and paintings, it will cost owners a fortune. The museum

need

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to be maintained, cleaned and equipped with up-to-date devices not only to protect the memory of history but

also

protect

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the author's precious works. But,

this

situation will have a slightly detrimental effect on

people

who wish to learn more about history. Charging a fee to enter will make

people

reluctant to pay an amount of money just to view a small number of

history

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pieces and pictures.

On the other hand

,

museums

which do not demand admission will be

prefered

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preferred

by

people

more than those with admission

fee

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. Without a price to enter,

people

will feel free to absorb knowledge without any restraints, since learning is free for all.

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aside

the

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benefits that

museums

gave

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, there are still disadvantages to it.

For example

, entering without any payment will result in lots of

people

inside the

museums

not only causing

disturbance

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and annoyance to others but

also

destroying the peaceful atmosphere that

required

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people

to

emerged

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themselves inside the meaning of each

artifact

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. In conclusion, the act of charging

people

will lessen the negative effects that threaten all the pieces of historical memory and provide a preferable profit to maintain the facilities and

artifacts

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that are presented in the

museums

.