In recent years recreational
activities
have many changes when compared to the past few decades. Most
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individuals believe that spending
time
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playing video games is just wasting
time
and
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adverse
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ofChange preposition
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their
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. I completely agree with the above notion and in
this
I would like to explain why I am supporting the majority opinion.
To begin
with, the people who are playing
such
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of games are simply wasting their money energy and
time
.
This
valuable
time
they can use
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for some other
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activities
.
For example
,
due to
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most
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children
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obese and that may lead to severe health problems like hyperlipidemia , diabetes and
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vision.
Secondly
, nowadays young generations are addicted
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activities
.
This
can reduce
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direct communication
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others and have some
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with
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interpersonal relationships.
For instance
, those who spend more
time
in
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activities
may develop some personality disorders like anxiety, depression and
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personality
due to
lack of direct interaction
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others.
In my point of view, those who
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to computer games are simply destroying their life in every aspect
such
as
time
money ,health and relationships. In conclusion
instead
of spending
time
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indoor
activities
, parents can insist their children
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engage in some outdoor
activities
or improve
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habits is better for their growth and
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.