The maps show a layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment Summarize and compare where relevant

The maps show a layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment Summarize and compare where relevant
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The two maps below illustrate the structure of an
office
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building at present and the plan for redevelopment in future.
It is clear that
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the layout of the room in present and after improvement has two entrances, four offices, WCs and a storeroom. One of the biggest changes is replacing
grass
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with other infrastructure .
Besides
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, the location of entrance and
office
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are changing. In future
office
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, the kitchen and canteen are no built. In the present
office
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building, the entrance was built near 4 offices, in the South of the room.
However
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, in the layout, the 4 offices will be replaced by 2 bigger ones, simultaneously the entrance will move between these rooms. The WCs will be moved from next to the storeroom to the right North, plus the coffee machine is located between the two areas. The biggest change is the renovation of
grass
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. The grasses are now built parallel to each other.
However
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, in the future, the
grass
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in the West will split into an Outdoor seating area and 3 parts for Chairs
while
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the
grass
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in the East will transformed into WCs, a Coffee machine, a meeting area and 2 parts for Chairs

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words office, grass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.
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