the chart below shows the percentage of men and women who did various free time activities in England.

Presented for consideration is a bar chart relating to the proportion of both genders engaging in various activities during their leisure

time

in England. The figures are measured in percentage. Generally, it is evident that most English residents including males and females spent

time

watching television

whereas

the least preferred was seen playing online games on computers.

Additionally

, it can

also

be observed that a majority of men would rather do other amusing activities in their free

time

with the exception of going shopping. Commencing with activities pertaining to electronic devices, it is apparent that both genders shared similarities in watching TV and using computers for gaming with approximately three quarters and 10% to 12.5% respectively.

Furthermore

, there is a significant gap between the rates of using the Internet, which was nearly 75% for men and

this

figure was twice times higher than their counterparts. Moving onto the remaining statistics, it can be seen that males doing sporting exercises and reading books illustrated higher percentages than the females

while

the opposite was seen in family gatherings and shopping. Particularly, males utilized their break to enhance their fitness and read books to unwind more than their counterparts with about 75% and slightly lower in the same order.

Additionally

, women tend to spend

time

with their families with more than 75% of them and the same goes for shopping, which

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