The chart below shows some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008

The chart below shows some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008
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The bar chart depicts the percentage of the environment and other problems reported by
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people in a UK city in 2008. In general, it can be seen that the highest expenditure throughout was education and training with the biggest expense in almost 5 of the 7 cities,with the exception of Glasgow and London where health services were the biggest expenditure. It can
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reports were always on air pollution. Looking at the data more closely, it can be observed that the highest expenditure was education and training, that the percentage varied between 60% to 5%, with Belfastsau being the highest. The one excepted is in Glasgow and London, where just varied around 50%. There were the most common
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of health care about 60%. It can be seen that health services
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being high, reach close to the education and training
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of around 40% to 50%. Turning to the remaining commodities, air pollution outplay here vas the significantly small, with any between 20% to 5%.
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were just under 10%, Carolidiff, Manchester and London saw a percentage near 20% air pollution than the other 4 cities

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words issues with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • affordable housing
  • urban areas
  • overcrowding
  • homelessness
  • traffic congestion
  • car ownership
  • public transportation systems
  • commuting times
  • air pollution
  • industrial activities
  • air quality
  • green spaces
  • urbanization
  • mental health
  • crime rates
  • socio-economic factors
  • sense of security
  • waste management
  • waste disposal
  • recycling
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