The diagram below shows how drinking water is made using solar power. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.

The diagram below shows how drinking water is made using solar power. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.
Contained in the diagram is the process of utilizing solar power to provide drinkable
drink
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Overall
, both the sunlight and drink taken from natural sources experience the conversation, but only
water
goes through the filtering phase before ready for consumption. Initiatively, sunlight is collected by the solar panel,
then
follows the electric wires to a converter, which is used to operate a pumper located at the bottom of an underground well.
Afterward
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, the pumper starts to take
drink
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from the well
,
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and transport it through a pipe connected
with
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a rain tank, ready for upcoming stages. Continually, rain taken from the well through the pipe is kept within a
water
tank above a wooden simple structure.
Next,
water
then
accessed by the filter part inside the tank and
finally
, purified
water
is stored in a tube blocked by a tap, ready for use.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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