the chart below shows the percentage of men and women who did various free time activites in England.

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bar graph provides data for the proportion of

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and

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who enjoy numerous activities in their leisure time in England. The numbers were measured in percentage (%).

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, it can be witnessed that the highest figures were attributed to the number of people

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watching television

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the opposite was true for individuals who are big on playing computer games.

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genders was not extremely noticeable, except in the realm of shopping, utilizing the Internet and playing computer games. Looking at the figures in

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detail, it can be observed that the majority of British chose to watch TV for relaxation with more than 75% in both genders.

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figure in spending time with family members was relatively similar

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both men and women

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roughly

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quarter of England residents. The other numbers were

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great with more than 70% in both

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and

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respectively for doing exercise and reading. Turning to the remaining statistics, there were

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disparities between boys and girls in shopping, using

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online websites and playing games.

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the percentage of women

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was approximately 10%, there was up to 15% of men

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activity to relax. More significantly, in terms of

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to the Internet, the figure of men was as twice

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its female counterparts, and the difference was even three times when people went shopping with only 27% male,

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the percentage of women was nearly 75%.