The chart below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing houswork in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing houswork in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate how many residents had electric devices in their homes, and how much time they avocated on housework in a nation, over a 100-year period.
Overall
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, it is evident that by buying kitchen appliances people spent less time working at home.
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the data, at the outset of the period, approximately one-third of the population had
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washing machines and vacuum cleaners,
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, a negligible amount of people had refrigerators. In 1940, half of the population bought refrigerators, and after that, their number skyrocketed. From 1980 to 2019, everyone had a refrigerator at their house. The number of washing machines and vacuum cleaners experienced an upward trend, and in 1960, approximately 70% of the residents had them in their place. By 1980, the vacuum cleaner had reached 100% and remained for the next forty years.
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, the popularity of washing
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saw a slight decrease in 1980
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and
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stood at sixty per cent in 2019. Turning to the second line chart, in 1920 the citizen wasted about 50 hours per week doing household activities.
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,
this
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time dramatically decreased over eighty years, and
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of the
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roughly 10 hours were spent on the
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by individuals.
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