The diagram below illustrate how recycled paper is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below illustrate how recycled paper is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The given illustration depicts the manufacturing process of recycling
paper
.
Overall
, it can be observed that
this
process encompasses 4 main stages commencing with the making of
pulp
before being filtered and cleaned to end up in the production of recycled
paper
. Moving the initial focus
on
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the first step of
pulp
making, collected
paper
is laid on the conveyor belt to undergo a chamber where the added mixture of water and chemical substances are used to clean
paper
.
Following
this
stage, the blend is
then
funneled
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funnelled
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into a vat, extracting the liquid and releasing the filtered
pulp
into another container
..
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.
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Turning the focus towards the filtered
pulp
entering the next step of cleaning, it is submerged in a container including water and soap
while
simultaneously air is pumped into it to aid in the evaporation of ink via a pipe.
Subsequently
, the deinked
pulp
is transferred to a new container to produce clean
pulp
prior to being
grinded
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ground
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by two heated rollers to squeeze out water, resulting in the rolls of recycled
paper
for usage.
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