The diagram below show how drinking water is made using solar power.

Contained in the diagram is information pertaining to how

water

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that we drink

everyday

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every day

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is made from clean energy.

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, it is a complex process, commencing with sunlight

affect into

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affecting

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the underground to culminating with

water

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contained in the container and ready to use. The procedure commences

the

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with the

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sunlight from the sun reference down to

solar

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a solar

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panel that will create

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apply

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power

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then

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and then

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go through the converter. After that there will

have

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electricity

come

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coming

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from

converter

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the converter

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and

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going

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to the pump

put

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and put

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into the ground. the

followings

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following

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steps involve there will be

water

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come

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coming

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from the pump and

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going

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into the

water

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tank. Preparing

water

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for drinking is the focus of the latter steps in the sequence. The

water

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ino

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into

the

water

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tank now

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goes

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through another tank. After

that

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that,

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the

water

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can be

drink

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drunk

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. The remaining

water

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will contained in the container.

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Linking words
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1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

143 words

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The diagram below show how drinking water is made using solar power.

Nowadays artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars. Why is this happening? Is is a positive or negative development?

In many countries today children begin learning a foreign language before entering primary school. What are the reasons for this? At what age should children begin to learn a foreign language?

The government should impose a fee on drivers who use their vehicle during rush hour to help cut down on air pollution from exhaust fumes. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?