The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The provided graph illustrates numeral information about museum visitors in
summer
and Use synonyms
winter
in 2003.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
Linking Words
summer
visitors were much in number . Use synonyms
Besides
, the museum visit was at its highest at noon and decreased after that.
Linking Words
To begin
, from 00:00 to 9 AM, the place visits were at the minimum in Linking Words
summer
and Use synonyms
also
in Linking Words
winter
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, in Linking Words
summer
, from 9AM to 10:30 AM, the line increased significantly and reached to around 1300, and Use synonyms
then
it rose modestly until 12 PM and it became 1500 and in Linking Words
winter
it rose until 10:00, it declines a little, it had some ups and downs until 12 o'clock, and it reached to over 600 persons . In additional, the Use synonyms
winter
's line started to decline slightly after 12 PM and it ended at 18 o'clock. Use synonyms
Also
, the Linking Words
winter
's line started to fall dramaticly after noon and at 14 o'clock it ended.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words summer, winter with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "declines" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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