The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the two types of beverages consumed in different economies.
Overall
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it is clear that
Britain is the only country that drinks Linking Words
tea
more than Use synonyms
coffee
, and the Use synonyms
amount
of Use synonyms
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imported equals the Use synonyms
amount
of Use synonyms
tea
imported across the four nations.
To start with, British people show their exceptional passion for Use synonyms
tea
by importing 80,000 Use synonyms
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of Use synonyms
this
beverage, Linking Words
while
their fellow Europeans—the Germans—only drink half the Linking Words
amount
of Use synonyms
tea
the British do. In comparison, the two North American nations, namely Canada and the US, both import 20,000 Use synonyms
tonnes
of Use synonyms
tea
, making them the countries with the least Use synonyms
tea
imports among the four nations.
Looking at the Use synonyms
coffee
section, it can be seen that the North Americans display their love for Use synonyms
coffee
, as both countries import about 40,000 Use synonyms
tonnes
of Use synonyms
this
product, twice the Linking Words
amount
of their Use synonyms
tea
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On the other hand
, Germany has the strongest domestic demand for Linking Words
coffee
and buys about 50,000 Use synonyms
tonnes
from overseas. Use synonyms
Lastly
, Linking Words
due to
their unusual desire for Linking Words
tea
, people in the UK drink less Use synonyms
coffee
than those in other countries, but the 30,000 Use synonyms
tonnes
of Use synonyms
coffee
they purchase is still higher than the Use synonyms
tea
imports in both Canada and the USA.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, amount, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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