The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the two types of beverages consumed in different economies.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Britain is the only country that drinks
tea
more than
coffee
, and the
amount
of
coffee
imported equals the
amount
of
tea
imported across the four nations. To start with, British people show their exceptional passion for
tea
by importing 80,000
tonnes
of
this
beverage,
while
their fellow Europeans—the Germans—only drink half the
amount
of
tea
the British do. In comparison, the two North American nations, namely Canada and the US, both import 20,000
tonnes
of
tea
, making them the countries with the least
tea
imports among the four nations. Looking at the
coffee
section, it can be seen that the North Americans display their love for
coffee
, as both countries import about 40,000
tonnes
of
this
product, twice the
amount
of their
tea
rchases
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purchases
chases
.
On the other hand
, Germany has the strongest domestic demand for
coffee
and buys about 50,000
tonnes
from overseas.
Lastly
,
due to
their unusual desire for
tea
, people in the UK drink less
coffee
than those in other countries, but the 30,000
tonnes
of
coffee
they purchase is still higher than the
tea
imports in both Canada and the USA.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, amount, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • import/export
  • commodity
  • metric tons
  • comparative
  • trend
  • data
  • statistics
  • significant
  • notable
  • figure
  • country-specific
  • bulk
  • graph/chart
  • depict
  • illustrate
  • fluctuate
  • dominant
  • minor
  • contrast
  • analyze
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