The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the two types of beverages consumed in different economies.
Overall
, it is clear that
Britain is the only country that drinks tea
more than coffee
, and the amount
of coffee
imported equals the amount
of tea
imported across the four nations.
To start with, British people show their exceptional passion for tea
by importing 80,000 tonnes
of this
beverage, while
their fellow Europeans—the Germans—only drink half the amount
of tea
the British do. In comparison, the two North American nations, namely Canada and the US, both import 20,000 tonnes
of tea
, making them the countries with the least tea
imports among the four nations.
Looking at the coffee
section, it can be seen that the North Americans display their love for coffee
, as both countries import about 40,000 tonnes
of this
product, twice the amount
of their tea
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On the other hand
, Germany has the strongest domestic demand for coffee
and buys about 50,000 tonnes
from overseas. Lastly
, due to
their unusual desire for tea
, people in the UK drink less coffee
than those in other countries, but the 30,000 tonnes
of coffee
they purchase is still higher than the tea
imports in both Canada and the USA.Submitted by yanjinru0827 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, amount, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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