The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given infographics illustrate the adjustments of Barmouth city in order to restrict cars commuting the old one.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
agricultural
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the agricultural
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site was demolished and more building areas of recreational facilities.
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, the fundamental amenities
kept
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remained throughout the given period. Looking at the northwest location of the town, 3 trees had been destroyed to 1 tree so as to expand the empty plot of land,
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a foot route had been converted into a road
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several trees.
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, a post office was unchanged to serve the residents in terms of communication,
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a flower shop had been relocated to
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flourish
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covered with the new shopping centre. As for banks and libraries, it highly demand for useful applications on a regular basis. Turning towards the location of the eastern, food shops
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as meat and candies had been pulled down to develop a tremendous supermarket and create a cordial environment. In the northeastern, the residential areas had been established regarding devasting the huge river, government office and farming section had been replaced by the exhibition and golf course to supply entertaining locations to all Barmouth dwellers.
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