The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The
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chart below illustrates Correct your spelling
bar
people
living Change preposition
in canada
canada
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Canada
are
visit different places.
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apply
Overall
, it can be seen that of People
in born Canada
is the higest
. Meanwhile, Correct your spelling
highest
People
New migrants
born in other countries
is the lowest of
figure.
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apply
In
the one hand, Cinema is the bigger data which is Change preposition
On
peole
Born in Correct your spelling
people
canada
begin at 70 per Change the capitalization
Canada
cent
. followed by New migrants
born in English-speaking countries
at approximatelly
65 per Correct your spelling
approximately
cent
. Then
New migrants
born in other countries
is
at 50 per Change the verb form
are
cent
. In addition
, Library
started New Correct article usage
the Library
migrants
born in other countries
is
the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
bigest
at about 55 per Change the word
biggest
cent
. followed by New migrants
born in English-speaking countries
at the point 40
per Change preposition
of 40
cent
. Then
Born in canada
Change the capitalization
Canada
approximatelly
35 per Correct your spelling
approximately
cent
.
Zoo begin
New Change the verb form
begins
migrants
born in English-speaking countries
at 50 per cent
. The next is people
born in canada
amount 45 per Change the capitalization
Canada
cent
. The last
is New migrants
born in English-speaking countries
at 35 per cent
.
On the other hand
. the data is lowest
Theatre. Starting New Correct article usage
the lowest
migrants
born in English-speaking countries
at amount 25 %. After that people
born in canada
at 20 per Change the capitalization
Canada
cent
. The last
, People
new migrant in other countries
is at 10 %.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, canada, migrants, countries, cent with synonyms.
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