The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. 

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The
bart
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bar
chart below illustrates
people
living
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in canada
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canada
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Canada
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are
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visit different places.
Overall
, it can be seen that of
People
in born
Canada
is the
higest
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highest
. Meanwhile,
People
New
migrants
born in other
countries
is the lowest
of
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figure.
In
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the one hand, Cinema is the bigger data which is
peole
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people
Born in
canada
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Canada
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begin at 70 per
cent
. followed by New
migrants
born in English-speaking
countries
at
approximatelly
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approximately
65 per
cent
.
Then
New
migrants
born in other
countries
is
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at 50 per
cent
.
In addition
,
Library
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the Library
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started New
migrants
born in other
countries
is
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are
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the
bigest
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biggest
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at about 55 per
cent
. followed by New
migrants
born in English-speaking
countries
at the point
40
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of 40
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per
cent
.
Then
Born in
canada
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approximatelly
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approximately
35 per
cent
. Zoo
begin
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begins
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New
migrants
born in English-speaking
countries
at 50 per
cent
. The next is
people
born in
canada
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amount 45 per
cent
. The
last
is New
migrants
born in English-speaking
countries
at 35 per
cent
.
On the other hand
. the data is
lowest
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the lowest
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Theatre. Starting New
migrants
born in English-speaking
countries
at amount 25 %. After that
people
born in
canada
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Canada
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at 20 per
cent
. The
last
,
People
new migrant in other
countries
is at 10 %.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, canada, migrants, countries, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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