The diagram shows how hydro-electric power is generated. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main details.
Presented for consideration is a diagram
pertainning
to stages involved in the process of creating Correct your spelling
pertaining
electricity
from water
.
Overall
, it can be observed that there are more than 4 stages starting with the evaporation of water
and end
up with being passed through the transformer station to produce Wrong verb form
ending
electricity
for human usages
.
In the initial stage, hydro is evaporated from Fix the agreement mistake
usage
sea
by the sun's heating, forming clouds Add an article
the sea
as a result
. Once clouds are formed, rains are likely to happen and filter the water
bank in dam
, Add an article
the dam
a dam
then
, valve opening and closuring
transfer Correct your spelling
closing
water
to the turbine and being pumped back to the water
tank, creating the reservoir phenomenon.
Turning to the subsequent stage in transforming water
into electricity
, the former output spin the turbine wheels, spawning electricity
before wiring in high voltages
cables.By Change the noun form
voltage
this
point , this
raw energy is travelled to the transformer station, where electricity
is delivered to households, plants and schools for usages
.Fix the agreement mistake
usage
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