The diagram shows how hydro-electric power is generated. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main details.

The diagram shows how hydro-electric power is generated. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main details.
Presented for consideration is a diagram
pertainning
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pertaining
to stages involved in the process of creating
electricity
from
water
.
Overall
, it can be observed that there are more than 4 stages starting with the evaporation of
water
and
end
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up with being passed through the transformer station to produce
electricity
for human
usages
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. In the initial stage, hydro is evaporated from
sea
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the sea
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by the sun's heating, forming clouds
as a result
. Once clouds are formed, rains are likely to happen and filter the
water
bank in
dam
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the dam
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,
then
, valve opening and
closuring
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closing
transfer
water
to the turbine and being pumped back to the
water
tank, creating the reservoir phenomenon. Turning to the subsequent stage in transforming
water
into
electricity
, the former output spin the turbine wheels, spawning
electricity
before wiring in high
voltages
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cables.By
this
point ,
this
raw energy is travelled to the transformer station, where
electricity
is delivered to households, plants and schools for
usages
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water with synonyms.
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