The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided maps show the city
centre
of Barmouth before and after exerted changes in order to ban entering cars the old Use synonyms
town
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, some places like a sweet shop and butchers have been demolished from the Linking Words
centre
of the Use synonyms
town
and supermarkets and shopping centres were erected in 2007.
It is clear from the maps that green places in the northwest of the Use synonyms
town
in 1936 were more than in 2007 and some of the trees were cut down in 2007. Use synonyms
In addition
, a cycle path was in the southwest of the Linking Words
town
in 1936 its application has been changed and it was a road in 2007. In the Use synonyms
centre
of the Use synonyms
town
, some places like the post office, bank, and library have been unchanged from 1936. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, a supermarket has been built in the location of a sweet shop and butchers, and Linking Words
also
, a shopping Linking Words
centre
has been erected in a place that was blank in 1936.
By looking to the northeast, a river can be seen that existed in 1936 but a residential area was built in 2007 there. Use synonyms
Moreover
, farmland and government offices located in the southeast in 1936 have been removed and a museum and a golf course Linking Words
centre
were constructed Use synonyms
instead
of these buildings in 2007.Linking Words
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