The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided maps show the city
centre
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of Barmouth before and after exerted changes in order to ban entering cars the old
town
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.
Overall
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, some places like a sweet shop and butchers have been demolished from the
centre
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of the
town
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and supermarkets and shopping centres were erected in 2007. It is clear from the maps that green places in the northwest of the
town
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in 1936 were more than in 2007 and some of the trees were cut down in 2007.
In addition
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, a cycle path was in the southwest of the
town
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in 1936 its application has been changed and it was a road in 2007. In the
centre
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of the
town
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, some places like the post office, bank, and library have been unchanged from 1936.
On the other hand
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, a supermarket has been built in the location of a sweet shop and butchers, and
also
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, a shopping
centre
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has been erected in a place that was blank in 1936. By looking to the northeast, a river can be seen that existed in 1936 but a residential area was built in 2007 there.
Moreover
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, farmland and government offices located in the southeast in 1936 have been removed and a museum and a golf course
centre
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were constructed
instead
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of these buildings in 2007.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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