The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided maps show the city
centre
of Barmouth before and after exerted changes in order to ban entering cars the old town
.
Overall
, some places like a sweet shop and butchers have been demolished from the centre
of the town
and supermarkets and shopping centres were erected in 2007.
It is clear from the maps that green places in the northwest of the town
in 1936 were more than in 2007 and some of the trees were cut down in 2007. In addition
, a cycle path was in the southwest of the town
in 1936 its application has been changed and it was a road in 2007. In the centre
of the town
, some places like the post office, bank, and library have been unchanged from 1936. On the other hand
, a supermarket has been built in the location of a sweet shop and butchers, and also
, a shopping centre
has been erected in a place that was blank in 1936.
By looking to the northeast, a river can be seen that existed in 1936 but a residential area was built in 2007 there. Moreover
, farmland and government offices located in the southeast in 1936 have been removed and a museum and a golf course centre
were constructed instead
of these buildings in 2007.Submitted by hadadianmohamadhossein on
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