The pie chart illustrates the proportion of persons who are captured and the bar chart illustrates the reason why they are captured in the five years ending 1994 .
The given pie charts depict the proportion of
males
and females
who were captured and the bar chart shows the reasons for capturing in the five years ending 1994.
Overall
, the portion of males
who were arrested was more than arrested females
and the main reason for arrest was public drinking for both genders.
It is clear from the data that just above a third of males
were arrested and 68 per cent
of them were not arrested. On the other hand
, the proportion of arrested females
was much less than arrested males
just below 10 per cent
and about 90 per cent
of them were not arrested.
The main reason of arresting for both genders was public drinking, but it is interesting to note that the portion of females
who were arrested due to
this
reason was more than males
just over 35 per cent
for women and just above 30 per cent
for men. The portion of males
who were arrested due to
drunk driving, breach of order, robbery, and other reasons was more than females
by about a quarter, just under 20 per cent
, just over 15 per cent
, and about 20 per cent
, respectively. The percentage of females
who were captured due to
violence was more than males
.Submitted by hadadianmohamadhossein on
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