The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
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The pie chart provides information about the destination of Anthropology graduates and the table indicates their salaries
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various types of employment after 5 years of work.
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almost half of the graduates decide to dedicate all their time
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working
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of studying or having a part-time job.
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employment, private companies offer a lower salary compared to other ones. Having
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full-time work after graduation with 52% has the biggest portion by margin among others. Being unemployed and having a part-time job with 12% and 15%
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respectively
are playing a less crucial role compared to full-time work.
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, studying for postgrad and working
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part-time together have
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portion with only 5%.
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salaries after 5 years of working, 5% of employers in freelance
consultans
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consultants
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consultancy
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the government
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sector have a salary between 25000 and 49999 dollars and 15% of both groups have a salary between 50000 and 74999 dollars which is lower than the
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of people in private companies that
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receive
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money.
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, private firms give 100000 dollars to 30% of their
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which is a bit lower than others.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • anthropology graduates
  • undergraduate degree
  • part-time work
  • full-time work
  • postgraduate study
  • unemployment
  • career trends
  • employment opportunities
  • flexibility
  • specialization
  • competitive job market
  • salary
  • earning potential
  • private sector
  • government sector
  • freelance work
  • public policy
  • cultural preservation
  • consulting
  • corporate anthropology
  • expertise
  • accrued
  • distribution
  • sector
  • trend
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