You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: •explain your position •apologies and offer to come on another day or later the same day. •ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. You do NOT need to write your own address. You should write at least 150 words.
#interview #place #course #college #appointment #time #admissions #tutor #•explain #position #•apologies #offer #•ask #tests #address
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope
this
email finds you well, I am writing this
letter regarding the interview of
your " Introduction Change preposition
for
in
English" course. Unfortunately, the Change preposition
to
time
of the interview not
suitable for me.
I Add a missing verb
is not
apolopies
for not being able to attend. Correct your spelling
apologies
apologise
Due to
the fact, that I have an important appointment at hospital
at the dental clinic, Add an article
the hospital
which
I tried to rearrange it but I can not. Correct pronoun usage
apply
In addition
, I am asking if there is any time
available to come. Such
as, Monday's
morning or next Sunday at the same Change noun form
Monday
time
?.
I am really eager to Change the punctuation
?
this
program as I hope to not mess itAdd a missing verb
do this
.
I have some questions to ask, Change preposition
up.
First,
I am wondering if the time
the interview will take so long. As well, if
there is a test on the basics of the English Language. Please let me know about the answers , so I can be Correct word choice
as if
prepeard
well and ready for the timing and the exam.
Looking to hear from you,
NOUF MUT
Regards,Correct your spelling
prepared
Submitted by noufxmut on
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Task Achievement
Your response is clear and addresses all the points needed. However, certain grammar and spelling mistakes, such as 'apolopies' and 'prepeard,' should be corrected.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter should have a clear structure with proper greetings and closings. Consider using 'Dear Admissions Tutor' for a more formal approach.
Coherence and Cohesion
The link between sentences can be improved. For example, instead of 'Due to the fact, that I have an important appointment at hospital at the dental clinic, which I tried to rearrange it but I can not,' you could say 'Unfortunately, I have an unavoidable appointment at the dental clinic which I have been unable to reschedule.'
Task Achievement
You could mention explicitly why you are interested in the course to make your keenness stand out.
Task Achievement
Ensure your writing tone is consistent, formal, and professional throughout the letter. For instance, 'I am eager to this program’ could be improved to 'I am very eager to join this program.'
Task Achievement
You have successfully addressed all the points required in the task.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your paragraphs focus on a single idea, which helps in maintaining clarity.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter closes appropriately and politely with a request for information.