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You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: •explain your position •apologies and offer to come on another day or later the same day. •ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. You do NOT need to write your own address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
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 email finds you well, I am writing
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 letter regarding the interview
of
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 your " Introduction
in
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 English" course. Unfortunately, the
time
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 of the interview
not
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 suitable for me. I
apolopies
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apologies
apologise
 for not being able to attend.
Due to
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 the fact, that I have an important appointment at
hospital
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 at the dental clinic,
which
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I tried to rearrange it but I can not.
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, I am asking if there is any
time
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 available to come.
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 as,
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 morning or next Sunday at the same
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?.
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 I am really eager to
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this
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do this
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 program as I hope to not mess it
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up.
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 I have some questions to ask,
First,
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I am wondering if the
time
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 the interview will take so long. As well,
if
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 there is a test on the basics of the English Language. Please let me know about the answers , so I can be
prepeard
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prepared
 well and ready for the timing and the exam. Looking to hear from you, NOUF MUT Regards,

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Task Achievement
Your response is clear and addresses all the points needed. However, certain grammar and spelling mistakes, such as 'apolopies' and 'prepeard,' should be corrected.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter should have a clear structure with proper greetings and closings. Consider using 'Dear Admissions Tutor' for a more formal approach.
Coherence and Cohesion
The link between sentences can be improved. For example, instead of 'Due to the fact, that I have an important appointment at hospital at the dental clinic, which I tried to rearrange it but I can not,' you could say 'Unfortunately, I have an unavoidable appointment at the dental clinic which I have been unable to reschedule.'
Task Achievement
You could mention explicitly why you are interested in the course to make your keenness stand out.
Task Achievement
Ensure your writing tone is consistent, formal, and professional throughout the letter. For instance, 'I am eager to this program’ could be improved to 'I am very eager to join this program.'
Task Achievement
You have successfully addressed all the points required in the task.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your paragraphs focus on a single idea, which helps in maintaining clarity.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter closes appropriately and politely with a request for information.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rescheduling
  • Unavailability
  • Flexibility
  • Consideration
  • Duration
  • Inquire
  • Preparations
  • Commitment
  • Eagerness
  • Documentation
  • Politely
  • Apologize
  • Inconvenience
  • Understanding
  • Specific preparations
  • Seriousness
  • Fit for the course
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