You live near a university and would like to earn some extra money by renting a room in your apartment to a student. Write a letter to the university housing office. In your letter, • introduce yourself • explain why your apartment would be a good living place for a student • describe the room you have for rent
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope
this
email finds you well, I am writing this
letter to inform you that I have a free room
for renting
, as I Replace the word
rent
belelive
one of our university students can get Correct your spelling
believe
use
Change the verb form
used
from
it.
My name is Change preposition
to
nouf
, I am studying English at our university. Change the capitalization
Nouf
Due to
the fact, that my place is really close to the campus, as I have an extra room
in my apartment,I am offering this
room
for rent. It's a suitable place to live as one of the univercity
members, because of how the Correct your spelling
university
liberary
and the supermarket, as well,Correct your spelling
library
a
Correct word choice
as a
pharmecy
Correct your spelling
pharmacy
is
located Correct subject-verb agreement
are
all
together near the apartment.So everything a person might need is available.
Now, I will Correct determiner usage
apply
decribe
to you how great the Correct your spelling
describe
room
is. It's a big room
with a studying desk ,
and a large Remove the comma
apply
capent
with storage features.
Looking Correct your spelling
cabinet
carpet
to
Rephrase
forward to
hear
from you, and if you need any additional details you can reach me by email.
NOUF MUT
Best Regards,Wrong verb form
hearing
Submitted by noufxmut on
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grammar and spelling
Be sure to proofread your letter to correct small spelling and grammar mistakes (e.g., 'belelive' should be 'believe', 'liberary' should be 'library', and 'pharmecy' should be 'pharmacy').
task achievement
Consider expanding your description by including more details about the apartment's amenities and the room itself. This would make your letter more inviting and informative.
coherence
Aim to separate distinct ideas into different paragraphs to improve readability. For example, you can have one paragraph for the introduction, one for the apartment's location, one for the room description, etc.
suitable writing tone
The letter is polite and the tone is appropriate for the context.
task achievement
You clearly introduced yourself and explained why the apartment would be a good place for a student to live.
greeting and closing
Your closing and call to action are effective and polite.