The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children's sport between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.

The given first chart illustrates

dara

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data

about the cash spent by parents in Britain on their

kids

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sport

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sports

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from 2008 to 2014,

while

the second chart demonstrates the number of participated children in three sports in the UK over that period of time.

Overall

,

it is clear that

the money which was spent on outdoor activities

raised

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slightly over the years,

furthermore

, the top-ranked sport was football, in the meantime, the lowest participation was in swimming.

Firstly

, in 2008, average monthly

spend

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was 20 pounds,

however

, in 2010,

this

number increased noticeably to 25.

Hence

, in 2012, it went up significantly to 29 and in 2014

this

number raised approximately to 30.

Secondly

, in 2008, the

participants

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number of participants

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who played soccer

were

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7.5

million

, meanwhile,

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in athletics

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athletics

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in athletics

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apply

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were

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only a

million

and swimmers

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were

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2.1

million

.

However

, in 2012, athletics had a dramatic growth to 5

million

, meanwhile, swimmers were approximately 3.5

million

.