The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps illustrate an industrial zone within the town of Norbiton,

along with

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proposed future

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changes and developments for the area.

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,

it is clear that

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,

according to

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future plans, many facilities to develop

this

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area will be added,

such

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as

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many houses, shops, playground, medical centre and school. First and

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, farmland will be replaced to the right corner of the river,

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many things will be added with regard to regional planning.

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, as most of the factories will

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by houses, some factories will transform into shops. Despite keeping the central roundabout, there are plans to construct a bridge starting from

farmland

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the farmland

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,

countinue

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continue

across the river, and

creating

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a new pathway in the north.

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new route will serve to connect to

residental

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residential

areas on the opposite side of the river with

exist

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infrastructure.

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, a smaller roundabout will be connected with

main

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the main

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roundabout and

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case will lead to

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enhanced

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accessibility to the shops and medical centre which

are locate

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are located

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between these roundabouts.