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You have some library books that you are unable to return as a member of your family in another city has fallen sick and you have hand to go and look after them. Write a letter to the library. In you letter, you should: explaining the situation apologize for the inconvenience called and say what you are going to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that regarding some books I borrowed
at
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library
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the library
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 The deadline is the 16th of March,
However
, as
member
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a member
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 of my mother who is
sicking
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 at
Hospital
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the Hospital
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, I must accompany her
due to
 only me who still is living with her. I deeply apologize for the inconvenience that I caused and it is worth saying that I have been late for
return
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 of the books until now. Coming back I promise will bring back the borrowed
of
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the
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books as soon as possible. Once again I am greatly sorry for
this
 and I hope that it will not change your mind about my punctuality in the future. Yours Sincerely Levi
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task achievement
Provide a more detailed explanation of your situation to fully convey the context to the reader.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that all sentences are grammatically correct and clear to enhance readability and coherence.
coherence cohesion
Your closing and greeting are appropriate and courteous.
task achievement
Your tone is polite and suitable for a formal letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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