The table graph illustrates football, basketball, cricket, rugby, and swimming in terms of how many boys in 6-11 and 12-16 took part in these sports in the UK in 2013 Overal
The given table gives
the
information about five outdoor activities in terms of different Correct article usage
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aged
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age
group
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groups
people
who participated in these sports in Change preposition
of people
United
Kingdom in the year Correct article usage
the United
of
2013.In the following Change preposition
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paragraphs
I will describe the variation and comparison where needed.
It has Add a comma
paragraphs,
beej
clearly seen thatCorrect your spelling
been
,
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Correct quantifier usage
more above
above
150 adult Change preposition
than
boys
took part in swimming but in another
sports Correct quantifier usage
other
boys
of age
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the age
of
6-11 took more participation. In football and Change preposition
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hockey
only Add a comma
hockey,
little
number of adults Correct word choice
a small
had been
seen.
Wrong verb form
were
Moreover
, boys
are more interested in playing football as well as
basketball where the number of adult players declined.
Overall
, it is evident that in 2013 swimming was the favourite outdoor activity of boys
,girls and adults but this
trend is
decreased in football and basketball.Unnecessary verb
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