The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two layouts compare the existing

pland

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plans

plant

plan

of Islip and its proposed plan for

future

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, it is evident that some major changes are going to take place, particularly a new

carriage way

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will be constructed. As we can see,

dual

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carriage path will be added around the city centre and connected to the main road outside the centre. The main outstanding feature is that

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some parts of the countryside, which is located

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the north, will be added to the city

center

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centre

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. The first shops raw will be

demilished

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demolished

diminished

and some new facilities

such

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bus station, shopping centre, parking area and new housing will be opened. The second main

shops

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raws will

be remained

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and the main road will be

transfomed

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transformed

pedestarian

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pedestrian

way. The

play ground

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playground

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will

be remained

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in the southeast of the town

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but in

smaller

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size. A new residential area will be built next to the park. The school building will be

extented

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extended

in its size and

remained

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on the south part of the

carriage way

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carriageway

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, next to the housing area.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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177 words

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pedestrian-only zone
dual carriageway
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surrounded by
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infrastructure
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car park
residential housing
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connectivity
green spaces
recreational areas
development plans
main features
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The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.

Write about the following topic: Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential to learn history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?