The table below shows the results of survey in a European country, which were carried in three different years. It shows the percentage of people who said that they were interested in certain sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the percentage of 7 primary sports chosen by individuals in a European country in 1999, 2004 and 2009.
Overall
, football was the most popular activities
among the three years, Fix the agreement mistake
activity
while
golf
and rugby
were less welcomed. Additionally
, cycling, volleyball, golf
and rugby
saw an upward trend over that period but other types of sports except swimming had the opposite tendency.
As is shown in the table, the percentage of people who consider football as the
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interesing
activities in 1999 was 57%, Correct your spelling
interesting
while
after experiencing a steady decrease, that figure for 2009 was 48%. Similarly
, there were fewer indiviudals
immersed in tennis, with 26% at the beginning but fell to 24% in 2009.
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individuals
Coversely
, the proportion of cycling, volleyball, Correct your spelling
Conversely
golf
and rugby
all increased over the 10 years. As for cycling, it rose from 32% to 34% while
those figures for volleyball were 12% and 24% respectively. Apar
from that, Correct your spelling
Apart
although
the percentage of people interested in golf
and rugby
increased, they were still under 20% in 2009. Additionally
, swimming was
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flucuated
over that period of time, Correct your spelling
fluctuated
rose
from 17% in 1999 to 20% in 2004, but declined to 18% in 2009 ultimately.Wrong verb form
rising
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