The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the rate of manufacturing of primary kinds
fuel
in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
Change preposition
of fuel
Overall
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
production
of petroleum fluctuated and reached the highest amount in the given time period. Correct article usage
the production
In contrast
, coal showed a downward trend Linking Words
while
natural gas Linking Words
production
significantly increased over the years.
First and Use synonyms
above all
, Linking Words
producing
of petroleum Replace the word
the production
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
highest
numbers in all years. Correct article usage
the highest
In addition
, between 1981 and 1986, it increased from around 90 to about 140 and following years it decreased wildly until Linking Words
in
1991. And it saw an upward trend and in the final year reached Change preposition
apply
the
about 140 Correct article usage
apply
millions
Change to singular
million
tonnes
.
In 1981, Use synonyms
production
levels of coal started with about 80 million Use synonyms
tonnes
and after saw a downward trend it rose steadily and slightly reduced between 1991 and 2000 and reached just below Use synonyms
the
40 million Correct article usage
apply
tonnes
in 2000. Use synonyms
To
opposite coal Change preposition
In
production
, Use synonyms
manufacturing
of natural gas significantly rose and arrived Correct word choice
and manufacturing
just
over Change preposition
at just
the
100 Correct article usage
apply
millions
Change to singular
million
tonnes
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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