The bar charts illustrates the consequences of a research done by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.
Overall
, it can be seen that the satisfaction with the IT support offered indicates more in full
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full-time
time
students
than part-time
students
, while
with the current opening hours, both types of student show a positive outcome rather than the previous service
Looking at the figure in further
detail, it is evident that over a half of full
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full-time
time
students
are very content with the IT support that the library provide
, a third of these pupils are just quite satisfied so only 13% leftover are find Change the verb form
provides
this
service is of any help. Compared with part-time
students
, nearly a
half of the cohort are actually dissatisfied with the library's IT support, around a third are Correct article usage
apply
quite
and approximately 20% of those Correct your spelling
quiet
are
find out helpful
Turning to the remaining statistic, both full-Unnecessary verb
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time
and part-time
students
indicates
a large percentage of satisfaction with 67% for Correct subject-verb agreement
indicate
full
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full-time
time
students
and 72% for part-time
students
. However
, the mid opinion that just a bit content with this
service contain
32% Verb problem
is
in
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of
full
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full-time
time
students
and 23% for
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of
students
part-time
. Therefore
, only 1% dissatisfied
showing in Change preposition
of dissatisfied
full
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full-time
time
students
and 5% for
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of
students
part-time
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