The bar charts illustrates the consequences of a research done by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.

The bar charts illustrates the consequences of a research done by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.
Overall
, it can be seen that the satisfaction with the IT support offered indicates more in
full
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time
students
than part-
time
students
,
while
with the current opening hours, both types of student show a positive outcome rather than the previous service Looking at the figure in
further
detail, it is evident that over a half of
full
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time
students
are very content with the IT support that the library
provide
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, a third of these pupils are just quite satisfied so only 13% leftover are find
this
service is of any help. Compared with part-
time
students
, nearly
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half of the cohort are actually dissatisfied with the library's IT support, around a third are
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and approximately 20% of those
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find out helpful Turning to the remaining statistic, both full-
time
and part-
time
students
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a large percentage of satisfaction with 67% for
full
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time
students
and 72% for part-
time
students
.
However
, the mid opinion that just a bit content with
this
service
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32%
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time
students
and 23%
for
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students
part-
time
.
Therefore
, only 1%
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showing in
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time
students
and 5%
for
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students
part-
time
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