Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people think that

professionals

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professional

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jobs

such

as

doctors

and engineers should be

work

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worked

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in the

country

where they did school and training,

while

others think

this

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these

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professional

jobs

could

work

in different

country

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countries

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as they wish. In my opinion, these professional

jobs

better

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are better

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working in the

country

where they learnt

than

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that

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different

country

, because they have been equipped and informed by the

charactheristic

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characteristic

characteristics

about

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of

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that

country

and trained to develop some beneficial skills to solve the

countries

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country's

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problem

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problems

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.

On the other hand

, these

professional

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professionals

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should

be allow

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be allowed

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to

work

in places that they want, because

this

belong

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belongs

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to their human right to choose the right places for working.

However

, many

professional

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professionals

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pursuing

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pursue

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their degree abroad

because

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because of

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the lack of facilities in their home universities that not

supporting

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support

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they

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their

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degree

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degrees

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a lot.

For example

, after finishing the degree, they came back to their home town and

serve

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served

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their society.

As a result

, they build some innovation to their own environment based on what expertise they had when they studied abroad. They

also

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were also

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involved

to developed

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in developing

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their home town

to

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in

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the

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a

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better direction.

However

, most of the time, the professional studied and trained about the

countries

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country's

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problem

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problems

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where they studied and

develop

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developed

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some beneficial skills to solve some

countries

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country's

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related problems. In order if they

ready

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are ready

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to

work

, they will be able to solve these

commons

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common

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problems in society, because they

well

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are well

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prepared when they

studied

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study

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in university. For specific,

doctors

in tropical

countries

must be able to cure some diseases related to the tropical weather

such

as malaria, and tuberculosis.

These kind

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This kind

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of

diseases

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diseases are

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only available in tropical

countries

and not available in four seasonal

country

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countries

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due to

their zoonosis that only lived in some specific conditions in tropical counties. Obviously, doctor from four seasonal

countries

not

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do not

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well study and

experienced

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experience

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this

disease because it

is

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does

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not happen in their

countries

and

uncommon

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is uncommon

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.

For example

, if

doctors

from four seasonal

countries

practice their

work

in tropical

countries

and

found

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find

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their

patient

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patients

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with unfamiliar

type

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types

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of

disease

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diseases

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,

this

might lead to wrong

diagnosis

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diagnoses

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and treatments for the patients.

To conclude

, professional

jobs

such

as

doctors

and engineers better

to

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working

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work

at

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in

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the

countries

they have been

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practised

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practice

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practised

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and familiar with,

this

is because they have been developed some beneficial skills to solve the

countries

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country's

countries'

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problems