The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The bar chart illustrates the
hours
spent by tourists
from China, America, Turkey
, and Brazil
on three different leisure activities during their visit to Greece in August 2019.
Overall
, the chart indicates that while
there are variations, both Chinese and American tourists
showed similar levels of interest in the depicted leisure activities, as did those from Turkey
and Brazil
. Notably, sightseeing was the least favored
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favoured
activity
among all groups.
In terms of reading, this
pastime was generally the most preferred, especially among Chinese and American tourists
, who spent eight and five hours
respectively. In contrast
, tourists
from Turkey
, America, and Brazil
spent four hours
reading on average each day.
When it comes to beach stays, there was a marginal difference of one hour between each country, with Brazil
leading at six hours
, followed by Turkey
, America, and China.
The activity
with the lowest interest was exploring new places. Both Turkish and American tourists
spent three hours
on this
activity
, while
Brazilian tourists
had a slightly higher rate with a one-hour difference. Chinese tourists
showed the least interest, spending only one hour daily on this
activity
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