The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019.

The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of online bargains made by five business organisations in Canada over four
years
from 2015 to 2019.
Overall
, the graph indicates that
although
there are variations, purchases made by the construction and wholesale company showed similar levels of interest, as did the retail and networking industry,
however
, the manufacturer's expenditures appear to fluctuate over the
years
. Notably, all businesses had their lowest transaction in 2015. The construction and wholesale industry both witnessed steady growth over the
years
. To
further
illustrate, in 2005, the construction sector made an e-commerce purchase of just over 20% but grew consistently and almost tripled by 2019.
Likewise
wholesales, they started at exactly 40% sales and
then
rose consistently to a little above three-fifths. Retail and information and technology
on the other hand
also
experienced a steady increment, notwithstanding, they dropped in the final year. In 2015, retail rates were at approximately 32%,
then
increased significantly to 50% in 2016, and slowly but amounted to about 58% in 2018 and fell briefly by roughly 0.5% in 2019. As for information and technology, the training
initially
began at 6%, reached a peak of around 75% in 2018,
then
declined abruptly back to 60% by 2019. The manufacturing segments had an erratic trade over the
years
, with an initial figure of 32% to nearly 52% in 2016, declined the next year, and
then
appreciated through the next two
years
to a total of 58% by 2019.
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