The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar graphs illustrate the amount of
time
that pupils spend to learn
in a Change the verb form
learning
vary
of colleges. Replace the word
variety
Overall
,it can be observed that all of the reported students
used more time
to study
at
Change preposition
on
weekdays
than weekends
. It should Change preposition
at weekends
also
be noted how
university A student spends most Correct word choice
that
time
to do
academic research Wrong verb form
doing
in
both Change preposition
on
weekdays
and weekends whereas
the opposite is true for Add an article
the learner
learner
from college D.
Looking at the Fix the agreement mistake
learners
weekdays
chart in Change to a genitive case
weekday's
weekdays'
further
detail, it is evident that students
in school C have the most study
time
with 10.6 hoursfollowed
by university B and E Correct your spelling
hours followed
hour followed
students
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
time
spend
accounted for 10.1 and 10 Wrong verb form
spent
hours
. Under this
level are students
from college
A and D only made up for 9.8 and 9.6 Fix the agreement mistake
colleges
hours
respectively.
Turning to the weekends
graph, Fix the agreement mistake
weekend
it is clear that
all of the college students
Change noun form
students'
student's
time
spend to study
reduced in compare
to Replace the word
comparison
weekdays
where learners from school A have the highest spend
Replace the word
spent
time
of only 9 hours
, continue
by university B and C Wrong verb form
continued
students
study
Verb problem
spent
time
only reported for 8.6 and 7.8 hours
. Additionally
, learners from colleges E and D witnessed at
a low of 6.2 and 5.6 Change preposition
apply
hours
in order.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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