The table graph illustrates football, basketball, cricket, rugby, and swimming in terms of how many boys in 6-11 and 12-16 took part in these sports in the UK in 2013 Overal
The provided bar chart illustrates information pertaining to the number of
kilometres
that passengers
travelled by various kinds of transportation in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, passenger kilometres
travelled by bus, rail, air
, and the total experienced an upward trend, Correct word choice
and air
whereas
the opposite was true for cycle
and bikes throughout the timeframe. Fix the agreement mistake
cycles
Additionally
, passengers
preferred using bus and rail to other means of transport.
Looking at the statistics for bus and rail in further
detail, they increased slightly from roughly 37 to 45 billion during the period, while
becoming the most favoured type of transportation among passengers
. The number of kilometres
travelled by air, however
, was substantially smaller, witnessed nearly a double from a mere 4 to around 8 billion over time. In total, the figure for passenger kilometres
travelled was an increase from exactly 100 to around 113 billion throughout the time scale.
In contrast
bicycles and bikes recorded smaller numbers of kilometres
travelled by passengers
. Specifically, they decreased sightly
from approximately 8 to half of that over the period of time.Correct your spelling
slightly
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