the maps below show a town center in 1990 and the same town center today.

the maps below show a town center in 1990 and the same town center today.
The maps illustrate how a downtown has been changed from 1990 to the present.
Overall
,
while
the residential place has been redeveloped over the timescale, the pedestrian area is included.
Additionally
, it is noteworthy that most of the recreational facilities
as well as
the town hall remain stable. Beginning with the north of the town
center
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, a row of small shops has been turned into a large shopping mall, which is adjacent to the still-standing childcare
center
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.
Furthermore
, even though the bank in the
middle east
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has been demolished in order to make way for a new café, the other one remains intact. Moving onto the south part of the town, all the houses have been renovated into modern apartment blocks.
Besides
that, there are some new crosswalks added to allow for providing safety for the people walking on the street.
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