the maps below show a town center in 1990 and the same town center today.

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The maps illustrate how a downtown has been changed from 1990 to the present.

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the residential place has been redeveloped over the timescale, the pedestrian area is included.

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, it is noteworthy that most of the recreational facilities

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the town hall remain stable. Beginning with the north of the town

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, a row of small shops has been turned into a large shopping mall, which is adjacent to the still-standing childcare

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, even though the bank in the

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has been demolished in order to make way for a new café, the other one remains intact. Moving onto the south part of the town, all the houses have been renovated into modern apartment blocks.

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that, there are some new crosswalks added to allow for providing safety for the people walking on the street.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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3 paragraphs

141 words

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the maps below show a town center in 1990 and the same town center today.

You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have

Some people say that wild animals have no place in the 21st century, and the protection is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth of overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?