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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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A glance at the pie charts delineates statistics about the commensurability of
water
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 consumed for threefold targets worldwide.
Overall
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, it can explicitly be perceived that agriculture virtually accounts for the main source of
water
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 consumption in South
America
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, Africa and Central and South East Asia,
while
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 industrialization has the highest quota in North
America
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 and Europe. Domestic
water
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 use, except for South
America
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 and Africa, is at least in the remaining continents.
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, the critical use of
water
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 is corresponded to farming in Central Asia. Looking into more details in North
America
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 and Europe, the industrial usage of
water
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 is 48% and 53%, respectively.
This
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 figure for agricultural use is approximately just over a third in both continents. Almost one-seventh of
water
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,
however
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, is consumed in homes, which is the lowest percentage. With regards to the other areas, meanwhile, increasing the utilization of
water
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 from 71% in South
America
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 to over four-fifths in the others, agriculture staggeringly has the climax percentage.
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 proportion for the industrial sectors in South East Asia is roughly twice that of domestic, taking 7 per cent.
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, the latter is higher than the former in the remaining regions, where there is under 10% difference between them.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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