The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given
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demonstrates the amount of three different fuel production in 1981 and 2000 in the UK.
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, it is noticeable from the line
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that the amount of
petroleum
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is more than other fuels
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20 years.
According to
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the
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in the year 1981 , Britain produced approximately 90
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of
petroleum
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while
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this
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number for coal and natural gas is respectively
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80 and just under 40
units
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.
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the related line
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to
petroleum
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is
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fluctuated, it owns more
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than others and after 20 years it reached 140
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.Coal has a descending
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which
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has arrived at under 40
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.The
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for Natural gas shows an increased amount of it which in the year 2000 has achieved more than 100
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.It is worth noting that in the years 1984 and 1991 natural gas and coal had an intersection
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they didn't meet
petroleum
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, petroleum, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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