The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given 20 years.
graph
demonstrates the amount of three different fuel production in 1981 and 2000 in the UK.Overall
, it is noticeable from the line graph
that the amount of petroleum
is more than other fuelsChange preposition
in
According to
the graph
in the year 1981 , Britain produced approximately 90 units
of petroleum
while
this
number for coal and natural gas is respectively with
80 and just under 40 Change preposition
apply
units
. Although
the related line graph
to petroleum
is
fluctuated, it owns more Unnecessary verb
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units
than others and after 20 years it reached 140 units
.Coal has a descending graph
which finally
has arrived at under 40 units
.The graph
for Natural gas shows an increased amount of it which in the year 2000 has achieved more than 100 units
.It is worth noting that in the years 1984 and 1991 natural gas and coal had an intersection while
they didn't meet petroleum
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