The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The supplied pie charts indicate the

amount

of

sales

in digital stores for various parts

in

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Canada

in 2005 and 2010. A glance at the graph reveals that the highest

amount

of

sales

was for Electronics and Appliance in

Canada

in 2005,Compared to 2010 which had the

most

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proportion of online shopping

sales

for Food and Beverage. In 2005,the

amount

of money earned by online shoppers for Electronics and

Appliance

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appliances

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was just over a third in

Canada

,just ahead of the percentage of

sales

in 2010 (%30).

In addition

,people did not prefer to buy Food and

Beverage

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Beverages

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in online markets at roughly %22 in

Canada

in 2005.Whilst,in 2010 just under a third of the population tended to have Food and Beverage from digital markets in

Canada

.

In contrast

,exactly a quarter of

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the selling

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selling

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sales

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of digital networks was for

Home

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Homes

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and Furnishings (%25) in

Canada

in 2005.

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l

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e,15 per cent of people did not choose to purchase Home and Furnishings from online shops in

Canada

in 2010.(Which was the lowest

amount

of

sales

over the period).

Moreover

,buying Video Games from online markets in

Canada

in 2005 was a bit as popular as purchasin

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them

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it in 2010,at 18 per cent and 23 per cent,respectively.