The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows how unemployed people in the UK spent their time
last
year broken down by women and
men
and
also
by the time of the day.
Aperantly
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women are most likely to spend their morning
on
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doing housework meanwhile only 19 per cent of
men
spend their morning on housework. When we talk about how unemployed
men
manage their free time in the morning it is obvious that they spend it looking for a job the table shows that 22% of
men
spend their mornings on
this
. Unemployed
men
and women have one thing in common which is they are so active in the morning unlike the afternoon
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