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The graph below shows that the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The graph below shows that the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
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The line graphs depict the changes in the percentages of Australian
exports
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 to four nations Japan, the United States,
China
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, and
India
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 from 1990 to 2012, measured in percentage terms. The most famous trend from the line chart is the dramatic increase in export rates to
China
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. By 2012,
China
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 had the highest export percentage,
while
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India
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 had the lowest. The most significant disparity between
China
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 and
India
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 was observed in 2012. In 1990, Australian exportation to
China
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 and
India
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 took up only a small fraction, with less than 5% each. In the following years,
exports
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 to
China
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 increased significantly to 25% in 2010, and
this
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 trend continued till the end of the period with almost 30%.
On the other hand
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,
India
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's
exports
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 remained the lowest throughout the period.
Exports
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 from Australia reached
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 peak in 2010 at around 8% but
then
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 declined to 5% after 2 years, which was only one-fifth of the figure from Japan. By 2010,
China
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 had surged to the highest position with around 26%, about 21 percentage points higher than in 2000.
In contrast
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, the United States had dropped to about 6%, a significant decrease from 12% in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, china, india with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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