Three pie charts below shows the changes in annual spending by a particular UK schools in 1981, 1991 and 2002.

Three pie charts below shows the changes in annual spending by a particular UK schools in 1981, 1991 and 2002.
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The three charts illustrate the variations in annual expenditure in UK schools in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
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while
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teachers'
salaries
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remained the schools' greatest cost, furniture and equipment overtook other workers'
salaries
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to become the second-largest expenditure by 2001. The highest
proportion
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of total
spendings
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were allocated to teachers'
salaries
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, accounting for 40%, 50% and 45%. The schools spent the second largest
proportion
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of
its
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expenditure on other workers'
salaries
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in both 1981 and 1991 at 28% and 22% respectively.
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,
this
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proportion
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decreased to only 15% in 2001.
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spending on furniture and equipment dropped from 15% to 5%, in 1981 and 1991 before it significantly
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to 23% replacing other workers'
salaries
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, by the year 2001. 15% of
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proportion
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the proportion
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was allocated
on
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recources
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resources
. After a small growth in 1991, the figure went down to only 9% in 2001. Insurance
proportion
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received the smallest percentage of
spendings
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spending
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, at 2%, 3% and 8% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, proportion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
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