The diagrams show the structure of the solar panel and its use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams show the structure of the solar panel and its use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Contained in the diagrams is information pertaining to the structure and usage of a solar panel.
Overall
, the whole system is a box including an inlet, outlet and a transparent top made of glasses.
Additionally
, the solar panel is generally empty inside,
however
, it can be adjusted to
use
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for different purposes involving heating
air
and
water
. Beginning with the process of heating
air
, it can be seen the
sun
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rays contribute heat energy to fuel the system. The progress commences when cool
air
goes through the inlet to get inside the box. After that, because the temperature in the system has been accumulated to a relatively high degree by sun rays, the cool
air
when it gets inside will be heated, resulting in warm
air
out from the outlet. Turning to the process of heating
water
, a
water
pipe is necessarily added to the box.
Similarly
to the heating
air
progress
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process
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, the cool
water
in
this
procedure goes through the inlet, and
then
the
water
pipe which is heated by sun rays. The whole process terminates when warm
water
gets out from the outlet.
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