The diagram details the process of making clothes from plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making clothes from plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The flowchart illustrates the way
plastic
bottles
are recycled to become fashionable items,
such
as clothes.
Overall
, the process takes thirteen steps, starting from
plastic
bottles
to clothes that are ready to sell to the public.
To begin
with, the
plastic
bottles
in household waste containers are transported to the factories. After that, the
bottles
are sorted,
this
step aims to separate any gunk from the materials.
Then
, it is going to be cut in a cutting machine.
Next,
small pieces of
plastic
bottles
will be washed to ensure cleanliness for the next process. Following the washing process, the pieces are dried directly under the sun for some hours. As the sequence of that, the
plastic
chunks that are fully dried are going to be boiled at a specific temperature until they become a liquid. The liquid will be strained and transformed into yarns,
for instance
, nylon or polyester. These yarns are woven by a loom to change them into fabrics. The fabric is
then
rolled into large sheets.
Finally
, the rolled fabric will be processed again to become various types of clothes.
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