You recently went on a sightseeing tour which you did not enjoy. Write a letter to the manager of the tour company. In your letter: explain why you chose that particular tour explain what you did not like about the tour suggest two ways in which the tour could be improved
Dear Mr Weasly.
I am writing
this
letter to bring to your intention
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attention
about
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apply
that
issues I have found. Correct determiner usage
the
that is
about my experiencing
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experience
immense
with your tour Correct word choice
apply
company
. I hope you can solve this
problem before you loosing
Verb problem
lose
customer
.
Fix the agreement mistake
customers
Last
week my family and i
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I
was go
to Sembalun for sightseeing, I was happy because the place is my dream. I asked my friend about Verb problem
went
the
better Correct article usage
a
company
tour for traveling
and she Change the spelling
travelling
recommanded
your Correct your spelling
recommended
company
. beside
the price is low.
I was excited before. But when start the Replace the word
besides
traveling
Change the spelling
travelling
i
feel very Change the capitalization
I
booried
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buried
bored
worried
due to
your employees. we just going to museum
and zoo. Correct article usage
the museum
whereas
, previously they say we will going
to Change the form of the verb
go
ancient
building. Not only that we Add an article
the ancient
also
disappointed because we just Add a missing verb
were also
spend
time about 10 Wrong verb form
spent
jam
.
You should consider Fix the agreement mistake
jams
about
your Change preposition
apply
company
. if you do not lossing
your Correct your spelling
lose
customer
. Fix the agreement mistake
customers
i
suggest you can solve about the service. Change the capitalization
I
in Addition
the time Correct your spelling
In addition
about
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apply
traveling
you have to Change the spelling
travelling
improv
.
thank you for your attention and I hope you can tackle the problem.
Correct your spelling
improve
Sinceraly
NurulCorrect your spelling
Sincerely
Submitted by patricius.yohanes on
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task achievement
Ensure to use correct punctuation and grammar throughout the letter to improve clarity.
coherence cohesion
Organize your points logically and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better coherence.
task achievement
You clearly addressed all the aspects required by the task: explaining why you chose the tour, describing what you did not like, and suggesting improvements.
task achievement
You have a courteous and appropriate tone for a complaint letter, which makes your points more compelling.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,