The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The given illustration demonstrates the production of
sugar
.
Overall
, this
linear process consists of 7 stages which mainly focus on crushing the harvested sugar
cane before purifying the collected liquid and drying it in order to form final products.
Initially
, sugar
cane are
going to be harvested by either machine or hand after being grown up for about 12 - 18 months on average. In the following step, collected Change the verb form
is
sugar
canes undergo the crushing stage in order to produce sugar
juice.
After being crushed into juice, the liquid is passed through a limestone filter to be purified prior to moving to an evaporator where heat is added to allow the juice transform
into syrup. Eventually, the Fix the infinitive
to transform
sugar
crystals is
eliminated from the syrup which are going to be dried Change the verb form
are
as well as
cooled to release sugar
ready for distribution.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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