The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation.
The maps illustrate a
student
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accommodation
prior to and following its redevelopment.Use synonyms
Overall
,the most significant changes at the Linking Words
student
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accommodation
have been the addition of three rooms,a social area, and a car park Use synonyms
while
no modifications have been made to the remaining facilities.
Looking at the Linking Words
student
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accommodation
in 2010,it had a garden on either side of the Use synonyms
accommodation
.Use synonyms
According to
the plan,the garden to the north of the Linking Words
accommodation
has remained the same Use synonyms
while
the garden to the south and to the northwest have been demolished to build a car Linking Words
parking
and Replace the word
park
student
bedroom.
The living room,originally positioned in the north area has been replaced by a new Use synonyms
student
bedroom.On arrival,students at the Use synonyms
accommodation
can take advantage of the amenities offered,including Use synonyms
a
en-suite room and social area to the south and east of the Change the article
an
accommodation
.Use synonyms
Finally
,despite the extensive renovations,the remaining facilities have remained substantially intact.Linking Words
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