The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country
The table gives information about how dairy products were consumed weekly by age group in a European country. The data was measured in
ml
for milk
, grams for butter
and percentages for full and low fat for different periods of age.
Overall
, it is clear that
the index of milk
consumption for adults over 65 was more considerable than the same figure for other ages. The number of people
who eat butter
increases dramatically more than others.
Looking at the details, the number of the elderly aged over 65 drank 1900 ml
milk
weekly, which contained 30 % full-fat, and 20 % low-fat and this
index showed the leading position in the group. The quantity of milk
consumption
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consumed
of
older adults between 26-45 and 45-65 was 1650 and 170 Change preposition
by
ml
accordingly
, while
25 and under 25 people
drank 1200ml
weekly.
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1200 ml
butter
of
45-65 Change preposition
for
people
was doubled of the same index for people
aged 65 and over 65 (30g). The number of butter
consumption for teenagers aged 25 and under 25 was 12, while
this
indication grew by 7 for humans aged 26-45.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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