The diagram details the process of making clothes from plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making clothes from plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pictures below represent the widespread method of creating clothes from moulded bottles.
Overall
,there are 13 stages in the chart,from collecting jars on the earth to wearing finished attire.
Initially
, the tons of elastic cups are gathered
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transferred to the processing factories. After that vials are sorted by factory workers for cutting in a special machine. Once the urn has cut sufficiently, the slights of plastic are washed and left for drying for several days. Later
then
,after complete desiccation, starts the process of boiling, in order to obtain a melting state. the melted plastic is pressed under high straining to get a tiny layer. Following the stage, it's cutting yarns from coats. These yarns are weaved in modern by weaving mechanisms in factories, and
then
weaved elastic materials are rolled and distributed to sewing workshops as ready parts for sewing dresses. Eventually, we wear fashionable clothing and save the environment from plastic waste emissions around the world.
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