The pie chart shows what languages used for web content as of May 2023. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts provide key information about the percentages of many reasons for migration to the United Kingdom during 2007. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the highest proportion of the reason why immigrants left their country, is to find a job. In addition
, most immigrants were looking for formal study, whereas
least of them were looking for accommodation. According to
what is shown, the peak proportion of the main reason for migration to the UK was to definite job; at one-third per cent , while
the tiniest fraction was to study abroad at 26%. Moreover
, those who travel to the UK for other purposes had the lowest rate at 11%. In terms of the proportion of looking for work has a significantly higher figure at more than a fifth, while
other immigrants were looking for a place to stay show a slightly lower rate at 13%.Submitted by deemaalkhathlan1 on
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